A level by yesimbill
First time ever making a level, tested it myself and everything seemed to work, but I didn't go super-duper indepth.
Everything in it was taken from the editor, music and all.
1 exit, 2 leeks
1 SMB3 Star
Reviews Mk II
Rejecting. Everything I said below still stands.
I approve. Very easy. The only thing I really don't like is the sparky that just falls down. The jet ride makes the level really easy.
-This is a fair World 1 level. There's some things I would change about it though. First, the mid-point is way too lopsided, there is barely any second half after the mid-point. I'd move it back a bit. Second, there isn't any indication to collect the dragon coins in order to gain the other star, the player just has to guess here. Third, I feel that the music doesn't fit so well in this level, I felt the level was more athletic than chillax, I would use the SMW athletic theme instead. Finally, that last '?' mark block where the fifth dragon coins with like a million coins in it, I'd reduce the amount of coins in it. I played the level with Sheath and I suprisingly beat it.
I kinda wish you extended the level more and expand on the gimmick you have going here. Since at the moment the level is very short and kind of ends abruptly. Nonetheless, approved by me after some changes.
-sturgyman 7:52 PM 7/10/2013 (MDT)
I have tons of issues with this level:
- You have lot of clash in this level. You' randomly have the SMW pipe in an SMB3 section, and you're using SMB tiles right next to SMB 3 blocks, which look out of place.
- The music does not fit at all.
- There is no indication whatsoever that you must collect all the raocoins to get a leek.
- You're having the blue blocks swimable for no reason and without saying a thing.
- The midpoint is very lopsided.
- That broken Sparky
- Why the sudden shift to water?
Rejecting. -SAJewers | 12:44 ADT, July 20, 2013
Accepted with changes. SAJewers made a good list of changes that need to be made, altough I do not care so much about clashing things from different games, and the blue block thing was pretty clever IMO. I should have a video uploaded Saturday. Septentrion Euchoreutes (talk) 20:17, September 19, 2013 (UTC)