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Wood Zone

A pretty standard forest level. Not too hard, fit for a world 1-3 probably. Quite a few NPCs to talk to, with a somewhat adventurous and relaxing feeling.

Author: Netosmar

Theme: Forest

Exit: SMB3 Normal Exit

Leeks: None

Raocoins: Yes

Restrictions: None

1-ups: 3

Judging

Approved by me if you add a midpoint and do something for those cutoff vines. You can for example add palm tree leaves on top of them. -Willhart.  Approved. -Willhart


Things I would fix

  • Since the strandard graphic of a 3up moon has turned into a yellow-like radish, I would either change what that npc says at the beginning, or insert the moon as a custom graphic and make it look like a moon. Since at the moment it doesn't really make sense with the A2MBXT devkit.
  • I would add some coins for collecting at the disco shell part, so it looks not as bland. 
  • The secret at the end is a bit too easy to discover by accident, but then again that might be on purpose.
  • I would probably change the music for the bonus room, it doesn't seem to fit at the moment.

Grammatical Errors I found:

  • "Oh mang, I'm lost in the woods!"
  • er... "pretty fun stuffs."?
  • In the sentence "you can have some stuff, then!", there's no comma after 'stuff'.

Other than that, it's a really easy-peasy World 1 level. Approved after some changes.

-sturgyman 5:28 PM 8/6/2013 (MDT)

I approve.  An easy level.  Not much else to say.

-Lv27MarkerMMan

Okey doke, approved by me. 

Wait, what's that? Three approvals? That's crazy. To celebrate, let's head on to the Approved level milk and bar for a night out.

-sturgyman

5:15 PM 8/20/2013 (MDT)

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